Looped Amnesia

Freed my shadows of life
Enveloped this chasm in a 
tactile less pristine emotion
Engraving deep in an ancient
portrait manifested by destiny.

Ascended amidst rotten corpses,
surviving on fading essence around
neglected screams of forewarning.
Blindly opted treacherous conduits.
Tipsy in devotion trekked in mirth.


A mythical tale alive from looped
amnesia,envisioned a dream in the wreck.
Tranquility encircled in mere thought
of a celestial being rescuing a mortal 
frame,destined beyond the time frame
 

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About Piusha

Futile writer,enjoys reading anything under sun.Still on a quest to find a new facet within me.
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6 Responses to Looped Amnesia

  1. Tito Dutta says:

    Namaskar,
    That is a wonderful poem. It has an excellent charm and rhythm. Wording is fantastic.
    Thank you.

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  2. Piusha Singh says:

    Thnxxx a million for your Kind review Tito Ditta.

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  3. Dear Poetess Piusha Singh,
    Amnesia is a word or terminology widely used in the medical field of Psychological trauma oriented cases among patients in hospitals. This is a word from Greek language meaning “without” memory is a shortage in memory caused by brain damage , disease, or psychological trauma or Amnesia which can also be caused temporarily by the use of various sedative and hypnotic drugs. Essentially, amnesia is loss of memory. The memory can be either wholly or partially lost due to the extent of damage that was caused.

    Poetry may be classified as general and personal. Inevitably, these divisions hold at least two meanings: there will always be what the author meant to say and convey, and what the reader gets out of the words. More the readers, the more meanings. It is not fair really to say a reader did not “get” a certain writer; every reader is free to interpret as he or she wishes. But in making an argument for the meaning of a poem, a reader has to be able to support his or her argument. One Poet's interpretation of a verse or text may be interesting to me, and especially when that one person is thoughtful and intense. Poetess Piusha Singh makes good and simple symbolic frames to depict her theme for herself; she deeply feels the poetry that she writes and is genuine in her approach towards poetry writing.
    WILLIAMSJI MAVELI http://www.ieditions.in

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  4. Good write, Thansk for sharing -WILLIAMSJI

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  5. A shocking reading experience within the limits and the borders of a life and love unlimited-My applause, Regards WILLIAMSJI MAVELI,

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  6. Piusha Singh says:

    Thank you dear William for your constant support in poetry circle.Many blessings.

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