After world of delusion

Floating in the crude waves

With a vigor to shatter the

walls of ambiguity,as animus

shoots infested a garden of Eden.

 

Colors and radiance of amore

drained in the porous chambers

of  flesh and blood,as demons

fought with angels to relish the prime.

 

Mortals ambushed to take a dip

in the holy crimson as a trail to

salvation,dancing merrily all

anointed to the after world of delusion(deception).

About Piusha

Futile writer,enjoys reading anything under sun.Still on a quest to find a new facet within me.
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4 Responses to After world of delusion

  1. Honorable, most talented, Poetess Piusha Singh,
    Reference to your fabulous poem as above, I wish to post my simple comments, the theme of your poem, though not novel as such, your winged words fly in the sky smoothly, Poetry is crucial language. Poetry relies on the writer’s feelings, history and perceptions, so every person has the background needed to write poems. Because poetry draws on the senses and the senses give deep access to memories and feelings, poetry writing is relevant and interesting.
    As far as Poetess Piusha is concerned, I still argue that she is not on the center stage currently, though she has been well gifted as a writer from heart and capable of depicting inner emotions in a high poetical imaginary as she had proved earlier in her wonderful writings, In all ages, poetry has been regarded as important, not simply for pleasure, but as something central to each individual’s existence, something of unique value, and something which makes us feel better off for having and which we are spiritually impoverished without. It is purely Poetess Piusha Singh’s “whims and fancies” whether to be or not to be a identified personality in literature, Unless and until the author decides on this, no effort can be achieved fruitfulness. This is only a humble opinion from my side as a literary friend or critic, forgive me if I am blaming outright, I really regret

    On the poetry side, Salvation is a legendary concept. It is like an escape. In religion, salvation is the saving of the soul from sin and its consequences. It may also be called release or liberation or something like redemption from physical or worldly sin and its effects. Salvation is considered to be caused either by the free will and grace of a divinity or by personal efforts through prayer and simplicity, or some combination of the two. Religions often emphasize the necessity of both personal efforts—for example, repentance and asceticism—and divine action like grabbing gracefulness.

    Poetry is vital language. Poetry relies on the writer’s feelings, history and perceptions, so every person has the background needed to write poems. Because poetry draws on the senses and the senses give deep access to memories and feelings, poetry writing is relevant and interesting.

    Please accept my congratulations for sharing such an elegant verse, may God gift you more and more inborn talents to depict fabulous poems, though you escaped from the real audience recently, wishing always, Good Luck, have a nice day, Regards WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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  2. Honorable, most talented, Poetess Piusha Singh,
    Reference to your fabulous poem as above, I wish to post my simple comments, the theme of your poem, though not novel as such, your winged words fly in the sky smoothly, Poetry is crucial language. Poetry relies on the writer’s feelings, history and perceptions, so every person has the background needed to write poems. Because poetry draws on the senses and the senses give deep access to memories and feelings, poetry writing is relevant and interesting.
    As far as Poetess Piusha is concerned, I still argue that she is not on the center stage currently, though she has been well gifted as a writer from heart and capable of depicting inner emotions in a high poetical imaginary as she had proved earlier in her wonderful writings, In all ages, poetry has been regarded as important, not simply for pleasure, but as something central to each individual’s existence, something of unique value, and something which makes us feel better off for having and which we are spiritually impoverished without. It is purely Poetess Piusha Singh’s “whims and fancies” whether to be or not to be a identified personality in literature, Unless and until the author decides on this, no effort can be achieved fruitfulness. This is only a humble opinion from my side as a literary friend or critic, forgive me if I am blaming outright, I really regret

    On the poetry side, Salvation is a legendary concept. It is like an escape. In religion, salvation is the saving of the soul from sin and its consequences. It may also be called release or liberation or something like redemption from physical or worldly sin and its effects. Salvation is considered to be caused either by the free will and grace of a divinity or by personal efforts through prayer and simplicity, or some combination of the two. Religions often emphasize the necessity of both personal efforts—for example, repentance and asceticism—and divine action like grabbing gracefulness.

    Poetry is vital language. Poetry relies on the writer’s feelings, history and perceptions, so every person has the background needed to write poems. Because poetry draws on the senses and the senses give deep access to memories and feelings, poetry writing is relevant and interesting.

    Please accept my congratulations for sharing such an elegant verse, may God gift you more and more inborn talents to depict fabulous poems, though you escaped from the real audience recently, wishing always, Good Luck, have a nice day, Regards WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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    • Piusha Singh says:

      Dear William ji,My deep gratitude to your kind remarks,i understood your opinion about my writing,i shall thrive for more.Hope for the best and you are right but i believe in destiny and William it’s better to be ourselves always,rest will follow.
      This is one of the thoughts written for the people of this world who lived, are living and may live to go to the mysterious after world of delusion.
      Regards and love.
      Piusha.

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  3. Many thanks for your reply message, much appreciated, Regards, WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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